Draft Film Poster
Feedback on our draft poster:
- People liked the idea of the image that we used.
- They said the image was too dark and that it was hard to define the villain's head from the foliage in the background.
- Most people liked the font of the writing and liked the writing where we have put the director, producer etc. They said this was almost identical to how real film posters have it.
- A couple of people said that the director and producer writing was too hard to read.
- Everyone liked the reviews at the top of the poster and that this made the poster look more authentic.
- Also they liked the way that the main actors were written underneath the reviews, separating them from the other names.
Draft Magazine Cover
Feedback on our draft magazine cover:
- Our audience didn't like the way that the actresses head is cut off at the top.
- They didn't like the poor quality of the editing.
- Or the limited variety of articles advertised on the cover- they said that it sounds as though almost all of them are related to "Missing".
- They liked the idea of the film strip down the right hand side
- They said that the little details like the barcode, price and the line where we have put "The UK's number one for film!" add extra authenticity to the cover and define it as a magazine.
Draft Film Trailer
Feedback on our draft trailer:
- People liked the transitions.
- Liked the contrast between the calm at the beginning and then the fast, chaos of the rest of the trailer.
- The liked the way that it is left as a cliff hanger, as they said that this makes it seem like a real trailer and makes them want to see the film.
- Some people commented that in trailers of this genre they normally give some narrative of why the villain is doing what they are doing (in this case- taking the child).
- People said that we should have had more shots of the child after she had been kidnapped- showing her emotions. They said that this would make them sympathise with her even more and what to find out what had happened to her.
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